Read each paragraph in the following essay and rewrite it, making necessary changes in order to enhance the effectiveness of the essay. Pay close attention to all of the elements you learned about writing style. Answers and solutions begin on the next page.
It is more beneficial to complete independent study than to attend college.
Do you think that a student can benefit more from completing independent study than from attending college? Plan and develop an essay in which you provide detailed and persuasive support for your opinion.